I think this is hilarious! I love it; had me laughing.
Apr 28, 2010
Scary animals by: Anonymous
Yes, I have lost many battles with this beast...
I like the humor in the haiku. Very clever how your title sets up a certain expectation in terms of tone, then the first two lines thwart that expectation to lead the reader in the opposite direction, and, finally, the third changes the direction again. I was definitely surprised by the ending.
