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May 18, 2010
 :-)
by: Everdil

I really loved all of them. You made me smile.
May 15, 2010
 Shadows
by: Anonymous

The shadow of marimba slats on sand -- unexpected, unique, but so evocative after the palm shadows -- I'm impressed by this one.
May 14, 2010
 I love the entire poem
by: Anonymous

Oh I love the entire poem, I can almost picture myself there from your lovely description! Great writing!
May 13, 2010
 Lovely haiku
by: Anonymous

What lovely haiku, which deliciously reproduce the textures and feeling of a tropical island.

I love the sound of these lines when I read them aloud:

"Number one under-
water wonder of the world.
Seven degrees north."

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