Frost covers the ground
Earth lies in frigid silence
Look, She is asleep.
Jul 05, 2016
Haiku: Rivers and StreamsNEW by: K River
Distant river's rush
feeds a shallow muddy stream
GOD creates our life
Questions:
Is this a good Haiku poem? Is this the correct idea for writing one?
If not what would make it better?
Spring is suggested but not stated is that OK?
Best regards,
K River
