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Apr 29, 2010
hi
by: Anonymous

good going Simon

Apr 28, 2010
Tonite
by: Anonymous

Thank you so much for sharing this poem. I felt captivated while reading it. It left me feeling calm and in awww when I was finished. I love this poem!!!

Apr 28, 2010
Beautiful haiku with surprises
by: Anonymous

What wonderful poems.

I love the surprising parallel that you created in the second and third lines in "Tonite," and your word-play with "true north" and "true love." And I love the surprise ending produced by the third line in "Who is the Artist."

Thank you for sharing, Simon.

- N.

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